2019中考作文高分技巧(附高分作文标题秘籍)

  【导读】2019中考逐渐临近,考生有没有为语文作文收集一些素材做准备呢?在作文中,除了需要大量的素材以外,标题也可以作为拿高分的一个因素。下面给大家分享一些关于写高分标题的秘籍!希望对大家有帮助。



  
活用动词

  动词的灵活运用是很多文章作文达人惯用的技巧,好的动词不用多,一个就足以让阅卷官倾倒,其独特魅力不言而喻。如《给心灵松绑》《保鲜诚信》。松绑本来是具体的动作,但用在心灵上就很新鲜,让人形成思想落差,而保鲜本来是用在水果、蔬菜身上的,此时用在抽象名词诚信上,就显得特别出人意料。

  借用专业术语

  在网络发达时代,一些本该用在行业内部的专业术语被广大网友所熟知,如果能够巧妙地用在作文标题中,不仅能恰当贴切地表达文章主旨,而且这种创意性的拟题方式也会收到不错的效果。如《送去主义》《校园写真》《贫困的反作用力》《催化人生》《生活中的欧姆定律》《真空下的加速度》《拍卖诚信》等等。

  借名拟题

  用名人、名言、名物、名事,并巧妙翻新,可以使拟出来的题目有种自然的亲切感,也容易被接受和认可。如《栽下梧桐树,引得凤凰来》、《阿Q新传》《阿Q学做诗》《李白的泪水》《感时花溅泪》《不畏浮云遮望眼》《痛并快乐着》《失落的祝英台》《一花一世界》《科技与人文齐飞》《一千零二夜》《淡妆浓抹总相宜》等。

  逆向思维

  求同存异不假,求异存同更能刺激读者的小神经,因此把顺理成章的事情进行反向思考,往往能收到奇效。如《常在河边走,也能不湿鞋》《到班门弄斧》《有志者未必事竟成》《虽贫,岂困?》《前不见古人,后岂无来者?》《享受挫折》《孔融让梨:是耶?非耶?》《忙人闲事》《眼见一定为实吗?》《要敢于走麦城》《痛苦也是一笔精神财富》《诚信过时了吗》《“卖狗肉”何必“挂羊头”》《没有异想,哪来天开?》等。

  巧用修辞

  运用多种修辞手法可以增强作文标题的吸引力,形象传神地表明写作立场,同时会使标题生动传神、富有文学色彩。

  比喻:《生命如涛》《攀登路上的烛光》《六盏红灯不能照亮前程》《诚信,交往的桥梁》《机遇是一条鱼》《朋友就是生产力》。

  拟人:《留些诚信给自己取暖》《粉笔的自述》《星期天的面孔》《阳光很活泼》《诚信出走》。

  夸张:《花瓶能装下春天》。

  对偶:《立志言为本,修身行乃先》。

  回环:《防盗门不防盗》;借代:倾听自己的心跳;设问:《谁丢了玉坠?》。

  对比:《“小人物”与“大道理”》。

  呼告:《妈妈,再爱我一次》

  巧用歌词

  歌词韵律感极强,有些歌词不用特意记忆就能不自觉地哼出来,很多脍炙人口的歌词早已深入人心,若在作文题目中出现,会很新奇别致,有时甚至能产生非读不可的效果。如《痛并快乐着》《潇洒走一回》《风中有朵雨做的云》《诚信:我的眼里只有你》《从零开始:想说爱你不容易》《幸福着你的幸福》《问世间情为何物?》等。

  巧用符号

  数学符号能化抽象为浅近,把复杂的意思表达得浅显易懂,可以包蕴无尽的内涵,而且生动别致,简洁醒目,收到纯语言文字无法达到的特殊效果。如《“1+1>2”》《“7—1=0”》《“1>6”》《成功=志+力+物》《多解的题:规矩=?》《联想1+1》《记忆≠智慧》《移植记忆≠获取能力》等。

  巧用并列

  以并列词语或短语做标题,突出文章所涉及的几个因素或蕴含作品主旨,增强读者阅读期待。如《一毛钱与诚信》《春夏秋冬》《图形·生活·思维》《借鉴历史开创未来》《你的岁月,我的记忆》《我的祈愿,我的爱》等。

  谐音双关

  丰富的多音字是汉语的一大特色,如果考生擅于利用这个特点,就能让作文标题“一心二用”,表达出幽默的效果。如《生命“诚”可贵》《向钱看与向前看》《乐在“棋”中》等。

  改造成语

  《“雾”里逃生》《“战痘”青春》《前“腐”后继》《“官”念前提》(讽刺某单位几任领导贪污腐化行为)等。

  附:200个值得套用的标题

  A.补全填空,说明你想写的文章所要表达的中心,然后品评此题目的妙处。

  1.《__是一道靓丽的风景线》

  2.《__,我永远的天空》

  3.《都是__惹的祸》

  4.《笑傲__》

  5.《生活需要__》

  6.《何以解忧,惟有__》

  7.《假如我是__》

  8.《告诉你,我很__》

  9.《我眼中的__》

  10.《生活需要__》

  11.《__在我的身边》

  12.《__也是一种美》

  13.《__是最美的行囊》

  14.《与__同行》

  15.《__伴我成长》

  16.《__三步曲》

  17.《__和我有个约会》

  18.《我发现__》

  19.《真想做个__》

  20.《世上只有__》

  21.《为自己准备一个___》

  22.《永远的__》

  23.《__,我恨你》

  24.《__,做我自己》

  25.《__的风波》

  26.《我和__的距离》

  27.《__着并快乐着》

  28.《给自己找个__》

  29.《永远说__》

  30.《那一次,我__》

  31.《预习___》

  32.《带上__上路》

  33.《我与__面对面》

  34.《__是一盏明灯》

  35.《那段__的日子》

  36.《一个__的心灵独白》

  37.《__,让我欢喜让我忧》

  38.《爱上__》

  39.《欣赏__》

  40.《我眼里的__》

  41.《那__?那___?那___》

  42.《想起____》

  43.《_的遐想》

  44.《问世间__为何物》

  45.《给心情涂上__》

  46.《人生路上__多》

  47.《__,我的最爱》

  48.《__的故事》

  49.《__是一种养分》

  50.《那年,我__》

  51.《和__赛跑》

  52.《我__,我__》

  53.《有____才有远方》

  54.《__在,梦就在》

  55.《还有多少__可以重来》

  56.《明天,我__》

  57.《我的__我做主》

  58.《__,是这样炼成的》

  59.《不想__》

  60.《在“__”中搏杀》

  61.《人生没有__》

  62.《__是一瞬间的事》

  63.《有一种__叫成功》

  64.《__伴我少年行》

  65.《带上__上路》

  66.《__是一首歌》

  67.《__是一种美丽的痛》

  68.《__的回忆》

  69.《有__陪伴的日子》

  70.《__,没有什么不可以》

  71.《与__一起走过》

  72.《__,让我欢喜让我忧》

  73.《拒绝__》

  74.《让__为__着色》

  75.《我__故我在》

  76.《__,妙不可言》

  77.《读懂__》

  78.《我总是__》

  79.《__一族的幸福生活》

  80.《__也是一种美》

  81.《__永不下岗》

  82.《那次,我与__擦肩而过》

  83.《___在我胸》

  84.《____是一种牵挂》

  85.《__带给我的快乐》

  86.《___也是一种享受》

  87.《___让我如此美丽》

  88.《____,其实你不懂我的心》

  89.《最近比较__》

  90.《将__进行到底》

  91.《__,我的最爱》

  92.《下辈子我做__》

  93.《谁都可以__》

  94.《__是金》

  95.《拿什么拯救你,我的__》

  96.《怎一个“___”字了得》

  97.《少年壮志不言___》

  98.《留些____给自己取暖》

  99.《敬畏__》

  100.《__不需要理由》

  B.说出可以套用此题目的三个话题

  101.你不必完美

  102.花儿努力地开

  103.“腾出一只手”给别人

  104.每天变傻一点

  105.最美的是你自己

  106.放开手,阳光灿烂

  107.人格的核心是自信

  108.遗憾也是一种美丽

  109.人间有味是红尘

  110.独处也是一种美

  111.我丑,并不伪装美丽

  112.花开花落两无言

  113.寒露不是秋天的句号

  114.此情可待成追忆

  115.背面也许很精彩

  116.海棠依旧?绿肥红瘦?

  117.剪不断,理还乱

  118.淡妆浓抹总相宜

  119.悠悠

2019中考英语作文20篇范文

  【导读】整理了这20篇英语范文涵盖了初中三年涉及到的所有英语写作话题,包括学习、健康、网络、生活、环保、礼仪等,会为你的英语写作提供清晰的思路和丰富的素材,多看、多记、多思,2019中考英语考场上写出优秀满分英语作文!

  

  (一)

  为了交流学习经验,提高学习效率,《中学生英语辅导报》举行了一次以How to be a good learner?为题的征文比赛活动,请写一篇80词左右的短文谈谈你的看法。

  [优秀满分范文]

  How to be a good learner?

  As a good learner, we should have good habits and ways of learning。

  We need to get ready for our lessons before class and always listen carefully in class。 It’s good to study in groups and help each other。 We should do more reading in our free time。 If we have some problems, we’d better ask others for help。 As a student, working hard is important, but don’t forget to do sports and keep healthy。

  I think all these above will be helpful to us。

  (二)

  亲爱的同学,你的初中学习生活马上就要结束了,请你以“My English Study”为题,谈一下三年以来学习英语的心得体会。

  要求:1。要点包括你在英语学习中所遇到的困难、解决的方法以及学习感悟;2。词数80左右。

  [优秀满分范文]

  My English Study

  How time flies! My three-year middle school life will be over soon。 Looking back, I have many memories of my English study。

  When I entered the middle school, I had so many difficulties with my English。 I was not able to understand the teacher in class, and I couldn’t master the words and phrases。 For a time I wanted to give it up。 Later, with the help of the teacher and my classmates, I listened to the teacher carefully in class, kept on reading English every day and spoke as much as possible。 Step by step I made great progress in English。

  In a word, only when you develop interest in studying English can you learn it well。

  (三)

  父亲节马上就要到了,但是有些同学不知道送什么礼物给父亲。请根据下面的提示进行适当扩展,并向同学们提出一些建议。80词左右,开头和结尾以给出(不计入总词数)。

  提示:1。如果有足够的零花钱,可以为父亲买一些使用单不贵的东西,如领带等:

  2。还可以为父亲做些力所能及的事情(do something that you can do),如为父亲准备一杯茶等他下班后饮用等。

  [优秀满分范文]

  Father’s Day is coming and you must be thinking of giving a present to your father。 Different people like different kinds of gifts。

  If you have enough pocket money, you can buy a useful but not expensive thing, like a tie。 I think your father will like it。 But if you don’t have enough pocket money, you can do something that you can do, for example, you can prepare a cup of tea。 When your father comes back from work, he can drink it。

  No matter what you do, the most important thing is to make your father happy on Father’s Day。 Don’t you think so?

  (四)

  请根据提示以“The Spring Festival”为题,写一篇不少于80词的英语短文。

  提示:1。春节是中国最重要的节日;

  2。人们大多回家过年,家庭成员团聚;

  3。家人一起吃团年饭、看电视、拜访亲朋好友(friends and relatives);

  4。孩子们喜欢春节。

  [优秀满分范文]

  The Spring Festival

  The Spring Festival comes in February or January。 It is the most important traditional festival in China。

  People usually go home to spend the festival with their family。 They have a big family get-together。 The Chinese people have big meals and watch TV during the Spring Festival。 They also visit their friends and relatives。

  Children like the Spring Festival very much because they needn’t go to school and they have a lot of time to play。

  (五)

  假设Linda是你的好朋友,你们两年没有见面了。上个星期她从国外留学回来,你们很高兴见到彼此。请根据提示,简要介绍Linda的变化。

  提示:1。外貌:以前个子矮,短发;现在个子高多了,长发。

  2。爱好:以前喜欢打乒乓球、看电视和聊天;现在喜欢弹钢琴、看书和散步。

  3。性格:以前外向;现在有些内向。

  要求:1。不要逐字翻译,适当发挥;

  2。层次清晰,语言流畅;

  3.80词左右。

  [优秀满分范文]

  Linda is my best friend。 She has changed o lot in the past two years。

  She used to be short and have short hair。 However, now she is much taller than before。 She has long hair。 She used to like playing ping-pong, watching TV and chatting with friends。 But she likes playing the piano, reading books and taking a walk now。 She used to be outgoing。 Now she is a little quite。

  I think people sure change as time goes by。 Even though she has changed a lot, we will be the best friends all the time。

  (六)

  背景设定:最近,康敏的加拿大朋友Michael给他发来电子邮件,想了解康明家乡的变化。假如你是康敏,请根据以下提示,给Michael回一封电子邮件。

  

  过去

  

  生活条件差,道路狭窄,车辆少,住不好,吃不饱,联系不便。。。。。。

  

  现在

  

  生活条件优越,道路宽,车辆多,住得舒适,手机普及。。。。。。

  

  要求:1。围绕以上内容进行合理表述;

  2。所表述的内容必须包含表中的所有方面;

  3。词数80词左右,开头语以给出(不计入词数)。

  参考词汇:living conditions, narrow, be crowded into, communications(通讯),telegram, thanks to, rapidly, mobile phone, policy

  [优秀满分范文]

  Dear Michael,

  You want to know the changes about my hometown。 You know, great changes have taken place since 60 years ago。

  In the past, the living conditions were very poor。 There were not many buses or cars, and the roads were narrow。 Usually, a big family was crowed into a small, dark house。 Most families couldn’t get enough food。 The communications were simple and slow。 People kept in touch with their friends and relatives far away mainly by letter or telegram。

  Thanks to the government, our hometown has developed rapidly in recent years。 The living conditions are much better and more comfortable。 The roads are wide。 Some people have their own cars。 Most of the people have lived in big new houses。 Quite a few adults have mobile phones。 Because of many good policies, I think our lives will become better and better。

  Sincerely

  Kang Min

  (七)

  随着网络的发展,人们消费观念转变,购物方式也在悄然地发生变化。“网购”成为一种时尚,越来越多的学生也正加入到网购群体中。请你根据以下表格的提示,写一篇网上购物的文章。

  

  优点

  

  1。足不出户;节约时间;避免拥挤、劳累。

  2。价格通常比较便宜。

  3。可供选择的范围广,品种多。

  

  缺点

  

  1。只能看到图片,看不到商品本身。

  2。容易购买大量不太需要的东西,造成浪费。

  

  注意:1。所表述的内容必须包含表格中的所有方面;

  2.80词左右,开头文章已给出,不计入总词数。

  参考词汇:网购shopping online;避免做某事avoid doing sth;商品goods;导致cause

  [优秀满分范文]

  With the development of the Internet, many people are used to shopping online。 It has become a fashion in our daily life。Some of us students also join the group。

  Shopping online has many advantages。 Just by a click of the mouse, you can buy what you’re interested in without going outdoors。 You can avoid getting tired and being trapped in the crowded people and cars and save time。 When shopping online, you can choose from more varieties of goods, whose prices are generally lower。

  Every coin has two sides。 Its disadvantages are obvious, too。 On the one hand, it’s very easy for you to buy goods different from the pictures you see on the Internet。 On the other hand, shopping online may cause people to buy goods that are not badly needed。 That’s a waste of money。

  All in all, I love shopping online。

  (八)

  假如你是李华,今年上初三了,现在的生活和以前大不一样了。请你根据自身的情况写一篇文章介绍一下自己的变化。词数:60-80。

  [优秀满分范文]

  I am Li Hua。 I am in Grade Nine this year。 My life has changed a lot in the past few weeks。

  I used to get up at seven in the morning。 But now I get up at six and read English for half an hour every morning。 I used to watch TV and go to bed at 9:30 in the evening。 But now I have to keep doing homework until 11:00 in the evening。 I used to play tennis in my free time。 But now I have to spend all my free time studying。

  I really miss my old days。

  (九)

  某英文报社正就青少年与父母关系这一话题开展题为How to keep a good relationship with parents的征文活动。请你根据以下要点,写一篇英语短文参加此次活动。

  要点:1。父母规矩太多,过于强调学习成绩,不理解自己等问题;

  2。你对这些问题的看法;

  3。你与父母保持良好关系的做法。

  [优秀满分范文]

  How to keep a good relationship with parents

  In my opinion, I have too many rules at home。 My parents never allow me to go out with my friends at night。 They don’t allow me to choose my own clothes, either。 And they pay too much attention to my exam results。 I think my parents don’t quite understand me。

  However, I try my best to understand them。 Although they don’t allow me to make my own decisions and give me too much pressure, I know that it is because they really love me and want me to have a bright future。

  In order to keep a good relationship with my parents, I study hard and listen to them。 I talk with them as friends, and always tell them my troubles。 I also help them do some housework。

  (十)

  今天是母亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国笔友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与母亲一起度过这个特别的日子。要点如下:

  1。表述你与母亲间的情感;

  2。为母亲制作一张卡片;

  3。帮助母亲做点事;

  4。陪母亲散步等。

  注意:1。词数80左右;

  2。请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;

  3。邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。

  [优秀满分范文]

  Dear John,

  It’s Mother’s Day today。 It’s a special day, isn’t it?

  I think we should do something to show our love to our mothers on this special day。 My mother and I are good friends。 Whenever I meet with difficulties, she is always there, ready to help me。

  Today I will make a beautiful card for her, with my thanks and best wishes on it。 Then I will help her wash the car this afternoon and cook her favourite food in the evening。 Besides, I’ll take a walk with her after dinner and then play chess with her, for she likes it very much。 I’m sure she’ll be very happy。

  What’s your plan for Mother’s Day? I’m looking forward to hearing from you。

  Yours,

  Li Hua

  (十一)

  英语课代表分发试卷的时候发现了一份没有署名的试卷,成绩为满分。请你帮助课代表分析它会时谁的。

  要求:1。设想当时的情景,适当扩展细节;

  2。书写工整,100词左右。

  参考词汇:top student优等生;handwriting笔迹;full marks满分

  [优秀满分范文]

  we had an exam yesterday and now the papers are being handed out。 There’s a paper without a name on it and that student got full marks。

  Whom can it belong to? It can’t be a boy’s, because none of them in class can be so good and tidy。 The paper must belong to a girl because its handwriting is very tidy。 There are only three girls who are good at handwriting — Rose, Mary and Lucy。 It might belong to Rose, but I’m not sure because she is not so good at English。

  It can’t be Mary’s。 Although she is a top student in English, she has already had hers in hand。 So it must belong to Lucy。 Today she is ill at home and she does well in English, too。 Well, it must belong to her。

  (十二)

  现在很多中学生都喜欢流行歌曲。请你根据下面的调查结果,写一篇80词左右的短文。

  

  kind

  

  reason

  

  a few

  

  quiet music

  

  make them feel comfortable

  

  many

  

  musicians who can write their own lyrics

  

  cool

  

  most

  

  music that they can dance to

  

  full of energy

  

  [优秀满分范文]

  Nowadays more and more middle school students like pop songs。

  A few of them like quiet music because they think quiet music makes them feel comfortable。 Many of the students like musicians who can write their own lyrics。 Why? They think it’s cool to express their own feelings。 Most of the students like music that they can dance to。 They think the music is full of energy。 When they are tired or bored, they can dance to the music。

  (十三)

  假如你是郭佳,你的美国笔友Linda给你写了一封信,说她想给自己的汉语老师送一份礼物来表达自己的感激之情,但是她不知道中国的送礼习俗,所以请你给她一些建议。请根据下面的提示,用英语写一封回信给她。

  提示:1。要根据个人喜好选择礼物;

  2。礼物的包装不要使用白色或者黑色包装纸(wrapping paper);

  3。不要送钟、鞋或者梨。

  要求:1。语意通顺,条理清楚;

  2.80词左右。(信的格式和开头已给出,不计入总词数)

  [优秀满分范文]

  Dear Linda,

  I am glad to give you advice on the customs of giving gifts in my country。

  Firstly, I think you need to find out what your Chinese teacher likes。 Choosing the gift that your teacher is interested in is a good idea。 Secondly, don’t pack the gift with black or white wrapping paper, because black and white aren’t considered to be lucky colors。 Thirdly, don’t buy your teacher a clock, a pair of shoes, or some pears because these have bad meanings in Chinese when giving a gift。

  I hope my advice can help you。

  Yours,

  Guo Jia

  (十四)

  刚到中国来学习不久的John应汉语老师的邀请去他家里做客,因此John 向Bob请教相关礼仪。假设你是Bob,请你给John回一封电子邮件,告诉他一些注意事项。80词左右,开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

  [优秀满分范文]

  Dear John,

  I know that you will visit your Chinese teacher’s home。 If you do the following, I don’t think you will feel uncomfortable。

  First, you should arrive a little earlier。 Being late is impolite。 Second, it’s also good to bring a gift such as some flowers or fruit。 Third, you will probably use chopsticks to have dinner。 Remember not to stick your chopsticks into your food。 You’d better say that the food is delicious while you are eating。 Finally, after dinner, showing thanks is also necessary。 And you are not supposed to stay long after dinner。

  Good luck!

  Yours,

  Bob

  (十五)

  假设上周六晚上,你们全家在一家饭店就餐。请你根据以下要点提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述事情发生的经过,并适当加以评论。

  要点提示:

  1。邻桌年轻人大声说话、吸烟。

  2。你请他们不要那样做。

  3。他们不听,反而嘲笑你。

  4。你认为:①他们在公共场所那样做是不对的。

  ②年轻人是祖国的未来,应该。。。。。。

  参考词汇:嘲笑laugh at

  要求:

  1。词数80左右,短文开头已给出(不计入总词数)。

  2。要点齐全,行为连贯,可适当发挥。

  [优秀满分范文]

  Last Saturday evening, all my family had dinner in a restaurant。

  We enjoyed ourselves while we were at table。 However, some teenagers sitting beside our table began to talk and laugh loudly。 What’s worse, they began to smoke in the restaurant, which made us angry。 After a while, I stood up and advised them to stop smoking and behave themselves。 To my surprise, they didn’t follow my suggestions。 Instead, they laughed at me, saying that I was too young and too naive。

  In my opinion, it’s wrong to do that in public。 The future of our country lies in teenagers, who should not only obey the rules in public but also make contributions to the society。

  (十六)

  健康对我们来说非常重要,我们可以用很多方法来保持身体健康。请根据下面表格的提示,以“Good Ways to Keep Healthy”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,倡议“健康生活”,从三个方面说明如何保持健康。短文首句已给出,不计入总词数,可适当发挥。

  

  1

  

  food

  

  a balanced diet, vegetables, fruit, less meat。。。

  

  2

  

  exercise

  

  do more exercise, take a walk, play ball games。。。

  

  3

  

  happiness

  

  keep happy, make friends, smile。。。

  

  [优秀满分范文]

  Good Ways to Keep Healthy

  It is very important for us to keep healthy。 But do you know the ways to keep us healthy?

  First, we need to have healthy eating habits, we can eat a lot of vegetables and fresh fruit, but we’d better eat less meat。 Different kinds of food are necessary, it’s also important to eat a balanced diet。

  Then, playing sports every day can also help us keep fit。 We can take walks after dinner, we can walk to school instead of taking a bus, after school we can spend hours playing basketball or soccer with our friends。 We should try to do more exercise every day。

  Happiness is another way to keep healthy。 When we are lonely or unhappy, try to make friends。 It is a good way to keep us happy。 If you smile often, you also feel happy。 So, be happy to be healthy。

  (十七)

  健康一直是人们关注的问题,我校要举行以“关爱健康”为主题的主题班会,请根据以下内容谈谈你的看法。

  1。保持健康的重要性;

  2。 保持健康的方法:多吃水果蔬菜;每天锻炼一小时;早睡早起;勤洗手;

  3。 自己的看法(至少一条)。

  注意:1。文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2。内容可适当扩展。3。字数60-80词;4。文章开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。

  [优秀满分范文]

  Boys and girls,

  It is very important for us students to keep healthy。

  There are many ways to be healthy。 We’d better eat more fruits and vegetables。 Take exercise for at least one hour every day。 We need enough sleep and rest so it is important to go to bed early and get up early。 Besides, we should wash our hands as often as possible。 In my opinion, we mustn‘t drink wine or smoke 。They are bad for our health。

  Thank you。

  (十八)

  近20年来,各方面的调查表明:青少年的体质不断下降。请你以“How to keep healthy”为题,写一篇80词左右的短文,说说你的看法和建议。开头已给出,不计入总词数。

  主要内容包括:

  1。体质下降的原因。如:eat too much junk food, have too much homework。。。

  2。合理的健康建议。如:should do more exercise, eat a balanced diet(饮食平衡), enough sleep。。。

  [优秀满分范文]

  How to keep healthy

  Nowadays students’ physical fitness is declining year by year。 I think there are some reasons。

  Students have too much homework to do, so they have little time to have sports。 Some students eat too much junk food。 That’s also bad for their health。

  Then, how to keep healthy? Here is some useful advice。 First, students should do more exercise。 Second, students should eat a balanced diet。 They should eat more vegetables and fruits, and try to eat less junk food。 Finally, enough sleep is also very important。

  (十九)

  节约资源,保护环境,从身边的小事做起。作为一名学生,我们应该怎样看待“低碳”生活?请以“My low — carbon life”为题写一篇短文,简述自己对“低碳”生活的理解及看法。80词左右。

  提示:1。步行或骑自行车上学;

  2。节约用水;

  3。不用塑料袋;

  4。节约用电;

  5。充分使用纸张。

  参考词汇:on foot, turn off, recycle, make full use of, plastic bag, tap

  [优秀满分范文]

  My low-carbon life

  Now the human living environment is becoming worse and worse。 So a new lifestyle called low-carbon life is spreading to every part of our country。 As middle school students, how can we have a low-carbon life?

  Firstly, we can go to school on foot or by bike。 Secondly, we shouldn’t waste water or electricity。 Do remember to turn off the lights when we leave the room and turn off the tap in time after using it。 Thirdly, we should use cloth bags in our daily life instead of plastic ones。 Fourthly, we should also make full use of paper。 We’d better recycle some of our textbooks。

  It’s important for us to live a low-carbon life to protect the environment。

  (二十)

  为配合我市“礼仪宜宾(Charm Yibin)”活动的开展,某学校开展以“How to behave well”为主题的英语作文,请你以一名中学生的身份写一篇60-80词的短文参赛。

  

  内容包括:1。守时,不说脏话;2。礼貌待人,热心助人;3。遵守交通规则,不乱扔垃圾;4。。。

  注意:1。文中不能出现校名和自己的姓名;2。内容可适当扩充。

  [优秀满分范文]

  How to behave well

  As a student in Yibin, we should behave well。

  First, I think it’s very important to do everything on time and keep promises。 Never lie to others or say dirty words。 Next we should be polite to others and ready to help people in need。 Then we’d better not talk loudly in public。 Don’t throw litter or spit about。 And remember to obey traffic rules。

  Finally, learn to work with others。 We need good team work in our life。

2019中考语文满分作文写作技巧

  【导读】看到别的考生中考作文拿满分是不是很羡慕,其实中考语文作文想要拿到满分并不是难事,只要考生做到以下六点,相信你也可以中考语文作文拿满分。下面来看看整理的2019中考语文满分作文写作技巧吧。



  写好一种体裁

  写记叙文,就好好把记叙文复习好。

  遵循两个原则

  1、真实才能动情。真正能打动读者的,还是那些你亲身经历有真情实感的身边小事;

  2、妙语才能煽情。只有风趣幽默,生动活泼的语言才能让读者眼前一亮,读之使人不断点头默叹。

  做好三字要求

  1、稳:写好事,力求能够按照记叙文的六要素把事情交代清楚,开头结尾注意点题,结尾处要点明中心,稳定的发挥好自己的写作水平。特别是写作能力较好的同学,不要强求自己必须写出“惊世之作”来,考试作文能够发挥自己80%的写作水平就很了不起了。

  2、细:不要像电视剧情介绍那样的简单叙述,中间要加入环境描写、人物外貌、动作、语言、心理描写,能力好的同学再来些远近相衬、动静相映、侧面烘托、环境渲染、五觉描写,是文章细腻、动人。

  3、精:对于一般的同学来说,“精”体现在:

  (1)选择自己最拿手的内容;

  (2)写出自己的字;

  (3)采用自己最顺手的结构(总分结构或顺叙方式),力求发挥好自己的水平。

  对于写作能力较好的同学来说,“精”应体现在:

  (1)选择较有新意的、又是自己有把握写好的内容;

  (2)有漂亮的书写;

  (3)精心的安排好开头和结尾,适当的采用倒叙、衬托、联想、象征、描写、抒情、以小见大、欲扬先抑、渲染气氛、借景抒情、托物喻志、以物喻人的方法方式结构文章;

  (4)采用适当的修辞手法,特别是运用比喻、反复、排比、反问等手法,恰当的运用成语、引用格言名句,增添文采。

  执行四个流程(保住基本分)

  1、审清题意:千万注意,题意审不好,来个文不对题,哪就……应该先花2-3分钟看看作文题,然后在开始答基础知识题目。

  2、立好中心:至少指导自己想说什么,是喜欢、是厌恶?是感动、是反对?是快乐,是痛苦?是哲理、是深情?是赞扬、是批评?…………用一句话把它写在草稿纸上。

  3、选好材料:符合题目要求的、自己最熟悉的、能够写好的事。

  4、写好提纲:

  (1)用一句话写出中心内容和主题;

  (2)分清开头、中间、结尾各写什么?

  (3)打好开头、结尾的细稿,以及每段的开头句。

  接下来就是在试卷里写作文啦,要力求一气呵成,只要提纲和开头、结尾、段落开头的稿子打得好,一气呵成事不难做到的,思路顺畅了20分钟就可以把作文写好。

  学好五项技巧(赢得感情分)

  1、有一个灵活的头脑:造句法、筛选法、换题法。

  2、有一张可爱的脸蛋:书写要工整,自己的字能够写多好就必须写多好,不得使用涂改液,不得随意修改,特别是开头、结尾和段落的开头句,不能修改。

  3、有一双闪亮的眼睛:好的文题等于成功了一半。参见《话题作文的拟题方法》

  4、有一身漂亮的衣装:

  (1)一个最拿手的题材(适合自己);

  (2)一个好故事(好布料);

  (3)一个好结构(好设计);

  (4)一口流畅、优美的语言(好花纹、好色彩)。

  5、有几件精美的饰品:

  (1)倒叙、描写、引用开头(好发型)

  (2)结尾:议论反问式、含蓄余味式、赞美抒情式、哲理深思式、名言点睛式、联想做梦式、决心号召式(名鞋);

  (3)名言名句名作的恰好点缀(钻石哟);

  (4)用景物描写渲染气氛(如梦的纱巾)。

  六个大忌(莫丢冤枉分)

  一忌潦草涂改:书写要端正,千万别连文题都改,只改明显的错别字,将错就错,能够不改的就不改。

  二忌过短过长:字数一定要足,字数不足,写得再好也很难及格;字数不能太多,不要超出试卷中的作文纸,万般无奈之下,也只能在2行以内。

  三忌开头议论:还不如开门见山、直接点题开头的好,能来点环境描写,就先来点描写。

  四忌分段太少:4-6段为好,千万别少于3段。

  五忌文不对题:不说也知道会有什么后果。

  六忌选材太俗:别总是玩呀、救落水儿童呀、猫啊狗啊……

  七隆重忌一点:千万别把人写死了,也不能把人写成癌症。

2019中考作文提分技巧

  【导读】在中考语文试卷中,作文分数占据了很大的比重,但是对很多学生来说,语文作文一直是最为头疼的事情。语文知识需要大量的积累,因此在其他题目上很难实现拉分,只有作文可以形成差距。但是很多学生的作文分数一直不高,从而影响语文的整体成绩。那语文作文要怎么拿高分呢?这里给大家分享一些语文作文那高分的技巧,希望对大家有所帮助。



  
1、给自己充足的构思时间

  在考场上,一旦开始写作,就没有后悔的机会了。因此,在写作之前,一定要给自己留出充足的构思时间,正确理解题目,确定要整体的写作基调。一旦构思确定,就不要轻易改动。考场作文最忌见异思迁,边写边改,这样只会导致心情烦躁,影响写作思路。

  2、精写开头,给老师留下好印象

  作文开头一般是阅卷老师评分的重点,好的开头不仅可以引起老师阅读的兴趣,而且还能给老师留下好印象,从而得到高分。因此,在写作文开头的时候,一定要精雕细琢,吸引老师的注意。学生可以采用多种修辞手法和写作技巧,表现自己的才华,从而给老师留下好印象。

  3、避免虎头蛇尾

  很多学生在写作文的时候都会反复推敲,力求做到,但是后来发现时间不够,只能胡乱写一个结尾,甚至不写结尾。这样是不行的,结尾是对文章的升华,也是老师阅卷的重点。因此,学生在写作的时候一定要避免虎头蛇尾,可以对文章进行总结、议论、扩展等,千万不能没有。

  4、注意文章标题的命名

  对作文来说,标题是文章的灵魂,同时也是展示学生才华的一个平台。学生在写作文的时候不能轻易放弃标题,缺题造成的后果并不只是扣2分这么简单,会对作文的得分上限造成影响。学生要仔细想好标题,不到万不得已的时候,不要用话题做标题。

  5、文章中多次扣题

  作文想要得到高分,材料、引语和话题中的相关文字至少要出现三次以上。开头三句内点题一次,结尾点题一次,中间至少扣题一次。文章中多次扣题不仅可以提醒自己不要偏题,而且还能起到中场休息的作用,调整思路和写法。

  其实,中考语文作文并不难写,难就难在如何拿高分。高分作文并不要求学生有特别出色的文采,只要稳扎稳打,注重细节,就可以在拿高分。因此,中考生要掌握语文作文写作的技巧,从而提高整体成绩,考到理想的高中。

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